Yet Another New Story

Yo!
It's been quite a long time since I wrote somethin' here -__-
Anywaaaay....
I decided to make another series about my life or at least resembles my life...
It's about daily dose of good deeds and each deed has a reward of its own.
So it's called "A Teaspoon of Good Deeds"

Contains:
- Daily good deeds made by a girl
- Filled with happiness, sadness and maybe love (?)
- A few characters from mangas, copyrighted of course :]

I will not update daily though, even though it's filled with daily dose of good deeds.
So, here we go! I shall start writing...I hope you guys like it! Enjoy!

New Story

I have a new project here!
A new story to be exact
I don't have the title for it yet, but I'm sure I'll find it someday :)

It's about a young girl, named Teresa Miki Benecia.
She lost her dear grandfather at the age of five.
Her small body pretty much describes how she looks back then (5 yrs old).
Her hair was always as soft as a baby's hair and her skin is smooth.
Then, when she was crying alone in her room, she met Dionisius Rio, a mysterious guy who appeared out of nowhere. Rio was tall, about 20 cms taller than Miki. His face was gentle and warm. He helped Miki to calm down.
The story starts here.

5 years later, Miki grew up to be an energetic 4th grader but she also became fierce and a bit emotional.
Lily Miriam, the rich newbie that enrolls to Miki's school. A quiet yet fun girl. She decided to sit next to Miki even though Miki has some problems with 'partners' sitting next to her.
So they walk home together, they're way home is (almost) the same........pass the nearest post office.
As they walk pass the post office, Lily starts to stop. Miki asked her what's happened and she said, "My house is near here. I'm off then."
Miki asks her where her house is. Then, Lily points at a big gate across from the post office. There, Miki saw an endless garden-like view (which was pretty much the entrance to that house).
"That's your house?" she asks. Lily nods her head and rushed to cross the street to her house. Miki saw everything. Right from Lily getting to the other side of the road and Lily ringing the bell and last, she gets picked up at the from gate by a car.
(To be continued....)

'Please' is the word

Konnichiwa, minna! :3

It's been a long time since I blogged here.
I already made my 2nd blog on blogspot, it's ALL about my life stories.
Dare to check it out? Just click tha hyperlink and you can directly see it.
Oh and don't forget to say hi to me at my cbox (the chat box on the left).

As you can see,
I'm the writer of the story called 'Human Nature'
udah 'mati' tuh cerita kali ya?
Maybe I'll 'revive' it again someday.

For now, I'll just leave the story behind and let it rest and maybe flow into my mind.
Maybe new ideas will be published.

My stories ain't that good, I tell ya.
But I'm eager to be better. I want to be a writer someday.
That is if I can.....-.-

Human Nature part 8 (pt. 1)

Author's note: I'm really really sorry it took soo long to finish the (maybe) last chapter. I've been really busy. It's a good thing the national exams and the school exams are finished. Now I have to finish the Yearbook, I hope it gets done quickly.I'm thinking of changing the title to "My Days" but I think "Human Nature" is good enough, even though I never managed to reveal any human nature. Oh and I'm sorry if (at first) this chapter isn't complete, cause (true story) it isn't quite finished yet. (I haven't got any time to write) Well, ENJOY!! ^^v

Chapter 8~ The Final Surprise (part 1)

"On Mr. Flame's birthday, we'll make him think that we hate him."said Ms. Rosalind, saying her opinion.
"I reject!" I shouted. "There's no way Uncle will fall for that cheap trick! He would know what and who's behind it quickly." I continued.
"That's why you're here, Carmel, dear." answered Ms. Rosalind.
I sat back down and was silent.
'So, I'm the bait, huh?' I said to myself. 'But why me?' I continued.
Ms. Rosalind explained the plan to us.
She said, "In order for this plan to work, we need you, Carmel, to make sure Mr. Flame doesn't know anything about our plan. You have to act cold towards him. Make him feel sad and make him curious about what's going on. Make sure he follows you when the preparations are done. While you lure the target, we will prepare for the surprise party. Mr. Murray and Mr. Liam will help us. Mrs. Graham will make all the food and beverages for the party. And little Cammy will make the decorations." And that's it.
"Okay, now it's time to make this plan work smoothly. You two ready?" she asked.
"Y-Yes Ma'am!" we both answered.
Quickly, after that's all done. Me and Mike exited the meeting room. It's actually Ms. Rosalind's room. The meeting was attended by only 3 people. Me, Mike and Ms. Rosalind. The other "players" have already discussed the plan with Ms. Rosalind days ago, just the two of us left.

As we walked down the hall, I said, "Wow, THAT was surprising."
"What? Why?" asked Mike.
"I've just witnessed the 'other side' of Ms. Rosalind. I never thought that there's still some 'youth' left in you big sister, Mike" I replied.
"Well, that's my sister for you. Her 'other side' is a rare thing to watch. I've never even realized it until today." said Mike.
"Well, you never know. Young woman like her seems to still have 'it' you know." I said, with a casual tone.
"'It' what?" asked Mike.
I giggled. "Well,Mike I guess you'll never know that. It's a something, umm, something that only girls know." I replied.
"Hey, come on. We're best friends right? Why don't you tell me?" he said, while touching my right shoulder.
"No way. It's a girl thing." I said to him while releasing his grip from my shoulder.
"Well, see you at lunch, Carmichael." I said to him while opening the door to my room.
"Alright, Madine." he said. As I closed the door, he said,"Wait, How do you say about having practice after lunch, huh?"
"Sure,but I WILL win again." I said to him while closing the door.
'Practice huh? I guess I should start making up some new moves.' I said to myself.
I sat down on my bed and laid my back while watching the ceiling. I can't relax. I am getting used to this life and I am trying my best to return home, but still I haven't got anything done yet. Even though I already did some research and Uncle already helped me, so many times. But even so I have to try my best to leave this place, yet leaving some memory to everyone I've met. I think about my disappearance from my home.
'Mom, I can see your worried face while searching for my presence. Dad, I can see that you're trying your best to make the family happy and trying your best to search for me. Brahms, big bro, I can see that you're worried about me even though you don't show it, cause that will make you a 'wimp'. My friends, everyone, I can see you're searching for me and want to have me back right next to you.'
'Wait a second, how can I see all of this in my head?' I asked.
I looked around my desk, I found the book. The one that took me here. I tried reading book, and for somehow I can understand the writing. But there's no clue how to get back home.
"Darn it!" I shouted.

I looked inside my drawer,I reached out for a pair of gloves made by me. It was made of black wool yarn and was knitted by me.It's actually my Uncle's birthday present. I made sure it fits his hand. I continued finishing the left glove, this was very hard since I'm a beginner and right handed.
While continuing I sang my favorite song. It's a song my mother used to sing to me when I was little. She sings this when I was sad or stressed out. It's called "A Mother's Whistle". It usually works for me. I usually get my mind calm and relaxed.

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At lunch, Ms. Rosalind served some rice with vegetables and cooked some of her best 'recipes for lunch', yet I don't know what it's called. We all gathered there and ate the lunch that Ms. Rosalind made. Mike finished first, then Uncle.
After that me and Ms. Rosalind. After lunch, I always help Ms. Rosalind to clean the table. Usually Mike goes outside to rest or breathe some fresh air. Uncle usually reads a book at the living room, while having some coffee served at the table. Ms. Rosalind usually clean the house and gets some chores done. I usually help, but when I'm not in the mood I slack off and do nothing or maybe do something else.
"Oh yeah, Mike asked me to practice. I guess I should head to the backyard." I said while running.

"I've been waiting for you, Ms. Madine." said Mike.
"What the? What's wrong with you? Is your underwear too tight?" I asked.
"Aww, man. Can't you be a little dramatic?" he said.
"Alright, I'll play along." I said. "What seems to be the problem, sir?" I continued.
"It seems that you are late." he said.
"I know that, sir. Please continue." I said to him
"Get ready and........FIGHT!" he shouted.
We started sparring, we want to keep up with each other and always be fit. I locked his movements with my hands and I slammed him down to the ground. I won again.
"Told you." I said to him.
He sat down and said, "Yeah, you're good. Next time you'll be the master."
"Sure, I'll take that offer of yours." I said casually.
He stood up and we shake hands.
"Woohoo! Nice one!" shouted Ms. Rosalind.
"S-s-sister! I never knew you were watching!" said Mike.
Uncle walked to Mike and said, "It seems you're not getting better, Carmichael. My niece manage to defeat you again."
"I know, she's good you know. But, I will defeat her someday." he said with pride.
"You got guts, kid. But actually the reason why she's so good is because........." said my Uncle. He continued whispering to Mike.
"Whaat? She knows kbbbbffffffffft." he said unfinished. Before he managed to finish, Uncle covered his mouth with his hand.
"Sssshh, Don't shout it out, kiddo! She will know and when she know that I revealed her secret, she'll burst and you don't know how it is when she bursts. It's terrifying!" said Uncle, whispering.
"Got that kiddo?" he asked Mike. Mike nodded. "Good." he continued.
"Wow, terrified of your own niece, she must be scary. Or maybe it's you who's the coward, Mr. Madine." said Mike.
"Yeah, she's a real monster. I remembered at her 10th birthday, one of her friends spilled some juice on her dress. She got angry and she started to run to her brother's room, took a baseball bat and hit that kid's face with it. It was terrifying. It's a good thing that kid survived." said Uncle Flame.

Human Nature part 7

Author's note: Yeey, Chapter 7 is now out! sorry it took so long to write this cause my hands are full with school stuff. Well, Enjoy!

Chapter 7 ~ The Past of an Innocent Child

"Hey, do you remember what you said back then?" I asked.
"Hm? What do you mean, Carmel??" replied Mike.
"You know, when you said, 'ah, you're name sounds like my friend who died in front of me' or something" I replied while saying the words like a sumo wrestler.
Mike walked quietly, thinking about it. As we walk home, he's still thinking in silence. After he muttered for a while, he stopped walking. I was surprised. What's in his mind? I thought.
He held his head up and said, "I'm sorry, Carmel. I shouldn't have said that to you back then."

Just when I was gonna calm him, he continued, "10 years ago, when I was about 6 years old, I had a friend named Carmel Norrace. She was my best friend, we played together since we were 2 or 3 years old. One day, Carmel, insisted to play near the old practice range. I tried to stop her but she didn't want to. So, I came along with her. When we were playing hide and seek, I was the one to seek. Right when I counted to 5, I heard her scream. I turned around and she was held captive by an old military veteran. It looks like he has a big vengeance on the Norrace family. He held his knife right in front of Carmel's neck. 'Well, well, looky here. I've got myself another piece of the Norrace and oh, an eyewitness. Just sit back and watch closely kid, I'm gonna kill your little friend right here.' he said. I wanted to help her, yet, I just a kid, I can't do anything. I charged towards him and he dodged me. He cornered me and laughed. He killed Carmel with a big knife in front of me and I screamed."

I took a big shock out of it. I can't even feel my legs. I can't believe Mike had exprienced all that in his childhood.
"Then, what happened?" I asked.
He bowed his head, it looks as though he tried to hide something. Something that will wreck his pride.
"After that veteran guy killed Carmel, he left without a trace. I saw Carmel's corpse and screamed like crazy. My sister came and asked, 'Mike, Michael, what happened? I told you not to play in these grounds! Y-you look afraid, Why?' I pointed at Carmel's corpse. My sister held me tight because I kept on screaming. Then, some other villagers came and took Carmel's corpse to the hospital. After seeing all that, I locked myself in my room for 3 days. There were some soldiers that came to ask about the case to me, but I refused. My sister came and said, 'Michael,do you want to see Norrace one last time?' I came out and hugged my sister. She smiled. The next day it was Carmel's funeral, I came first and went home last. My sister kept waiting for me patiently. A year later, the veteran was caught and executed for killing the last remaining member of the Norrace family." he said.

I was still shocked. I could imagine all the blood, the pain, the suffering and the life Mike has to live through his childhood.
"I'm sorry. I'm sorry. I didn't now you had to go through all that." I said while crying. Mike smiled and reached out his hand at me.
"Come on, Carmel! Stand up, that's my past and you know it! You don't need to cry over the past. Come, let's go home." he said.
I nodded and washed up all my tears. I went back home with him.

At home....
"And where have you two been?" asked my uncle.
"Umm, I can explain." I said.
"I cant believe you did this to Carmel, little brother." said Ms. Rosalind.
"No, sister. It's a misunderstanding. I.." replied Michael.
"I know you two are good friends but it's dangerous for a peachy girl like Lia to go out with a young man like you." said my uncle.
"UNCLE!!!" I screamed.
"No, buts, Lia you have to do chores until I tell you to stop!" said my uncle.
"Whaaat????!!!" I said.
"And Michael,you have to help me wth work everyday until it's done." he said to Mike.
"Aww, man!" said Mike.
"No way! Uncle!" I screamed.

Human Nature Part 6

Chapter 6 ~ Disaster

As I walked across town square with Mike, I noticed a crafts store near by. I stopped walking. I stood there, thinking. Mike looked back. He saw that I was standing in front of a crafts store.
"Hey Carmel, why are you standing in front of Mrs. Graham's store?" he asked. I was surprised.
"What? Mrs. Graham? You know the store's owner?" I asked with confusion. He laughed.............hard.
"Yea, why? You wanna go in there??" he asked. I nodded.
"Well then, why are you still standin' around there?? Come in!" he said. I smiled and followed him inside the store. As the door opened a bell ringed as a sign that a costumer is entering the shop. "Welcome!" said a womanly voice. "Oh it's you Michael." she said.
"Greetings, Mrs. Graham." he greeted while taking of his hat. The woman smiled. She looked about in her 30's but I'm not that sure, just like what my brother use to say, 'Don't judge a book by its cover, Lia. So, don't judge anyone from their looks.'
"What brings you here? Oh and is this sweet little girl you're girlfriend?" she asked nicely. Me and Mike's face turned red.
"N-n-no! She's just a newcomer from another town and she's my friend. So umm, she wanted to know her way around town that's all." said Michael while shaking his hands left to right repeatedly. I giggled.
"Why are you laughing? It's not funny you know!" he said to me.
"Hehehe, but you were so funny. You're face even looks weird." I replied.
"Ohohoho, what a nice girl. What's your name Miss?" asked the woman.
"My name is Carmelia Madine. Nice to meet you." I greeted. The woman had her surprised expression on.
"You're Flame's daughter??" she asked.
"Oh no ma'am. I'm his niece." I said innocently.
The woman looked very calm after I said that. "My name's Russie Graham. But please, just call me Mrs. Graham. I prefer that." said Mrs. Graham to me.
"I just remembered something!" I shouted. "Mrs. Graham, do you have any threads or any sewing stuff? Maybe a flannel cloth?" I asked.
"Oh, right this way, Carmelia. Just go to the sewing aisle and pick your choice there." said Mrs. Graham. I nodded and rushed over to the sewing aisle. The store wasn't a usual store. From the outside it looks as though it's a small store but when you get in, it's like a supermarket only in the 80-90's style. I found the sewing kit up on the top shelf, I tried to reach it, yet it's too high to reach. Mike came over and helped me. "Here ya go." he said while giving me the sewing kit I wanted.
"Thanks." I replied. "So umm, you got any currency from this country?" I asked him.
"Wh, wh, wh, Whaat? Didn't you bring any money before coming here??" he said with a surprised look.
"Yes, but I don't have any currency from this country." I said. Mike started to mutter to himself, as if that he was thinking. He stopped muttering and smiled. "Alright. But, you have to repay me for this. " he said to me. I nodded.
"What do you want as a repayment??" I asked.
"Anything that you can make. But you have to make it by yourself and not helped by anyone, okay??" he said. I smiled and nodded.
I went to the cashier and payed for the errand.
"Cammy dear, would you please take that bag over there??" asked Mrs. Graham.
"Yes, Grandmother." replied a little girl, about 5 years old. Her hair was tied to 2 pigtails. How cute, I said to myself. Mrs. Graham said thank you to Cammy and Cammy rushed back to her room.
"Here you go, you two." said Mrs. Graham while giving the shopping bag to me.
"Oh, yes. Thank you very much." I said to her.
"You're welcome. Take care now, kids!" she said while waving to us.
"We will!" I shouted.
As we walked outside the door, Mike just walked quietly while seeing his wallet a few times. I'm broke, he said to himself.
Why? Because, I bought 1 sewing kit, 5 flannel cloths, 8 wool strings and other craft equipment. Mike's the one that payed. We went back to my uncle's house. On the way there, Mike started to ask me questions.
"What do you need these stuff for, Carmel??" he asked.
"I wanna make some crafts." I answered.
"For?" he asked.
I sighed. "I wanna make some crafts for my uncle. Since he disappeared from my world and we've met each other again, I wanna make something for him also...." I said.
"Hm?" said Mike.
"It's almost his birthday and it's gonna be a birthday present and a reunion present. And I have to repay you for reuniting me with my uncle and for paying the crafts equipment just now." I said while smiling.

Character Information 1

Author's note: Every 5 chapters I publish, I give an extra bonus!
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Subject: Carmelia Madine
Age: 15-16 years old
Nickname/Aliases: Carmelia, Carmel(friends), Lia (family), Big sister/Nee-chan (Cammy), Little sister (Brahms)
Family: Flame Madine (uncle), Brahms Madine (big brother), Catherine Madine (mother), James Cameron Madine (father)
Profile:
She got trapped in a parallel world just because her friend gave her a paper with a hidden message in it. She didn't fulfill the message's request, so in return she got sucked to a parallel world where her life will restart. She found out that her uncle is actually a military personnel. Her uncle put her to Mahestry Academy, so she can gain some knowledge about the parallel world and have some friends. She's classmates with Michael and Dawn.

Subject: Flame Madine
Age: 25 years old
Nickname/Aliases: Flame, Uncle (Carmelia and Brahms), Little brother (James), Colonel/Boss (subordinates)
Family: Carmelia Madine (niece), Brahms Madine (nephew), Catherine Madine (sister in law), James Cameron Madine (big brother)
Profile:
He was also stuck in the parallel world and got into the military mess. He's ranked Colonel and works in the Special Military Squad. He works at his office (in his house) and often slacks off. And when it's the deadline he will say: "I don't have much time to do all this I'm always busy day to day!" but he actually have enough time to do it. All the people from his world thought that he dissapeared, but actually he was dragged to the parallel world for no reason. he can't go back now because it's too late.

Subject: Michael Carmichael
Age: 16 years old
Nickname/ Aliases: Michael, Mike (Carmelia, Flame and Rosalind), Brother (Rosalind), Little boy (Johann)
Family: Rosalind Carmichael (big sister)
Profile:
Rosalind's little brother. He has a tragic past that he experienced with Rosalind. His parents died in an accident (in a war). Since 'that day', he has been acting weird and wants to get his and his sister's life back to normal. He always tries to get the answer but never did get it. He goes to Mahestry Academy and have Carmelia as a classmate. He likes Carmelia because of her kindness and cuteness (it's rare LOL) but he constantly forgets about it. He's been working with Flame Madine to get Rosalind back to normal. When he was young, he saw his own friend got killed with his own eyes and became over-protective to his friends because of it.

Subject: Rosalind Carmichael
Age: 24 years old
Nickname/Aliases: Rosalind, Ms. Rosalind (Carmelia), Big Sis/Sister (Michael)
Family: Michael Carmichael
Profile:
Michael's big sister. She and and Michael had a tragic past. Her parents got killed in a war and got special abilities to read minds of others people since 'that day'. She always worries about her brother, because he's been searching a way to return her back to normal since the 'that day' incident.

Subject: Johann Murray
Age: 24 years old
Nickname/Aliases: Johann (everyone), Mr. Johann/Johann-san (Carmel), Lieutenant (subordinates and Flame)
Family: Unknown (currently)
Profile:
A subordinate of Flame, he's very loyal. He like cute and young girls and takes Carmel as his very own little sister. He's ranked Lieutenant and entered the Special Military Squad and works with Flame.

Subject: Reinhard Liam
Age: 24 years old
Nickname/Aliases: Reinhard (everyone), Mr. Reihard/Reinhard-san (Carmel), Major (subordinates and Flame)
Profile:
Flame's subordinate, very loyal and kind. He has a father figure and really likes to joke with his wife and son. He's really polite when talking and he doesn't like people who gives up easily. He's really eager to help others and sometimes care about others more than himself.

Human Nature Part 5

Chapter 5 ~ Town Square

The next day, Mr. Reinhard and Mr. Johann came here again. What a drag, why the heck do they keep coming here? I asked myself. "Because, they have some business to take care with your uncle and my brother." said Ms. Rosalind while bringing a tray full of tea cups, full tea cups. I looked at her while she stopped walking and sighed. She smiled and continued to walk towards my uncle's office. After she came out from my uncle's office, she put down the empty tray on the table.
" 'What a drag, why the heck do they keep coming here?' is what you said, am I correct?" she asked me. I was still surprised. Why can Ms. Rosalind hear my thoughts. I never knew she had that kind of ability. I nodded. She sighed and laughed.
"Hahahaha, since that day I can listen to other people's thoughts. and I can't hold back to answer or at least laugh at what they're saying in their mind." said Ms. Rosalind calmly. I sighed of relief. Ms. Rosalind just smiled innocently and stood up, she walked towards her room and the living room became empty. I laid down on the big sofa, it was long enough for me to fit. I just lay there looking like an empty minded sloth. Michael passed by and started to think. He sat at the couch next to the sofa (where I am currently) and smiled at me. I just look away and pretend like it never happened.
"Aww, Carmelia...You don't need to pretend. Just say that you're bored and we'll take a walk around town." said Michael while stretching his arms.
I sat at the sofa (I laid there remember?) and sighed. "Do whatever you want." I said to Michael.
He walked towards my uncle's office and came out 5 minutes later. I was sitting of boredom and Michael said, "It's been decided, we'll walk around town!"
"Wait, I go get my jacket! It's cold outside!" I said to Michael, he nodded. And I ran upstairs to get it quickly.
"Sister, Flame, We're going!" shouted Michael. "Be careful, brother!" said Ms. Rosalind. "And take care of little Li-, I mean Carmel!" Michael nodded. I almost got angry, because Ms. Rosalind was gonna call me Lia, but that name is only use by my family. And we walked toward the town.

After about 10 minutes, we reached town. I was so crowded unlike my uncle's house (it's big yet so peaceful.....too peaceful). I walked close to Michael, I don't wanna get lost, right?
We entered a big road full of shops and other stuff. "Carmelia, welcome to the town square!" said Michael. I looked around. I was amazed. There were lots of stores and shops, there was a music store, a cafe, a supermarket, a clothing store, etc.